diff --git a/examples/resume/experience.tex b/examples/resume/experience.tex
index ae07787..34204e3 100644
--- a/examples/resume/experience.tex
+++ b/examples/resume/experience.tex
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
 {May 2026 - Present} % Date(s)
 {
   \begin{cvitems}
-    \item {Bridged T. Rowe Price and an external AI consultancy to continue in-flight GenAI work after their offboarding}
+    \item {Took ownership of in-flight GenAI work from a departing external AI consultancy, transferring codebases and continuing delivery without interruption}
     \item {Built GenAI scaffolding on Snowflake Cortex and AWS Bedrock: Streamlit interfaces, DBT pipelines, and AgentCore/MCP prototypes}
-    \item {Navigated T. Rowe Price's fragmented systems to provision access and clear CI/CD gates (quality, SAST, testing), unblocking AI platform delivery}
+    \item {Provisioned access across enterprise platforms and cleared CI/CD gates (code quality, SAST, automated testing) to move AI workloads into production}
   \end{cvitems}
 }
 
@@ -53,12 +53,11 @@
 {Dec. 2019 - Nov. 2021} % Date(s)
 {
   \begin{cvitems} % Description(s) of tasks/responsibilities
-  \item {Led complex field deployments of Edgybees real-time video georegistration platform at customer sites}
+  \item {Led field deployments and onboarding for Edgybees' real-time video georegistration platform, serving as primary technical liaison for deployment, configuration, and training}
   \item {Integrated customer hardware, networks, maps and telemetry streams in air-gapped Kubernetes environments}
   \item {Replaced proprietary ESRI/ArcGIS with GDAL/NumPy pipelines, cutting state-scale terrain processing from days to 12 hours on consumer hardware and eliminating external GIS servers and vendors}
-  \item {Developed in-house expertise on MISB 0601 video telemetry standards to troubleshoot live video georegistration bugs at customer sites}
-  \item {Served as primary technical liaison during customer onboarding, providing hands-on support for deployment, configuration, and training}
-  \item {Delivered high-stakes technical demos to government and defense stakeholders, securing operational adoption}
+  \item {Built in-house expertise on MISB 0601 video telemetry standards to diagnose live georegistration failures at customer sites}
+  \item {Delivered technical demos to government and defense stakeholders, securing operational adoption}
 \end{cvitems}
 }
 
diff --git a/examples/resume/summary.tex b/examples/resume/summary.tex
index ef997b1..99e5bb6 100644
--- a/examples/resume/summary.tex
+++ b/examples/resume/summary.tex
@@ -16,5 +16,5 @@ now focused on GenAI platform work.
 Builds pragmatic systems that cut cost and complexity,
 choosing the right tool for the problem rather than the default.
 Equally at home in customer-facing roles and in ambiguous, high-friction enterprise
-environments where the hard part is making things actually ship.
+environments.
 \end{cvparagraph}